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« on: January 05, 2010, 02:32:27 pm »
As the clock struck four,
She lied dead on the floor,
By my hand she breathed no more.

To some a cold case,
Buried deep in disgrace,
Erased from the human race.

Since she has been slain,
I've forgotten my pain,
Life started over again...
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« Reply #1 on: January 05, 2010, 11:13:13 pm »
Some what dark
but I find it rather humors.
good rhyme
sounds like words that Sherlock
found in one of murder mystery cases
though you have signed your name...Smiley

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