HEATED CHALLENGE

[Purple]

Assuming the last poetry challenge was too difficult I've come up with something easier for Summer, as it's far too hot to think of anything clever! 

So ... with that in mind... if you want to, or if you can be bothered... write a poem in any style you like on the subject of...

HEAT. 

[Purple]

So this post doesn't get lonely here's a poem to start you off should you choose to accept the challenge. 

Heat

The temperature soared
as the hottest night
turned into humid day.
The whispering fan
offered no release
and thoughts drifted astray.
Her soft fingers trailed
across damp skin,
the heat too much to bear,
their bodies aflame
from inside out,
the heat began to wear,
as a bead of sweat
rolled down her neck,
his mouth kissed it away.
The temperature soared
as the hottest night
turned into humid day...

[Donald J. Lester]

Heat's Shadow


In the mist of evening's fall,
as the sun embraces
angels' goodbye;
while the moon
embraces halls' of passion.
The heat of day
transforms the heart's enzymes
to linger,
on soft and enticing secrets
in tender lair,
in the sanctuary of passion;
where beauty
bestows submission,
like an open flower,
releasing its' fragrance;
mingling with the senses,
enthralling nerve endings
of touch...
engulfed in hotness
becoming one
until the cool touch
of daybreak whisks
nakedness,
with its nerveless whisper,
blending yesterdays
into tomorrows...
where hearts are united
into the ebb and flow
of life...
The heat,
the cool fragrance,
of an angel's kiss....

[Rena Hands]

Purple, that’s/this is some sensual and most verbally arousing post. Curious, why did you bold the whole poem? Does it serve to emphasize? And if so, what does it emphasize?

Don, are the following to be possessives…

In the mist of evening’s fall, OR…In the mist of evenings’ fall, (?)

…angels’ goodbye OR…angel’s goodbye; (?)

…embraces halls’ of passion. (?)

I think it should be…releasing (its) fragrance;

I think it should be…with (its) nerveless whisper,

Again, is this a possessive…of an angel’s(angels’) kiss (?)

You certainly have a way with poetic terminology. The imagery was marvelous.
 

[Donald J. Lester]

smile...yes i sometimes don't check that closely...
will make some changes..

welcome back

Don~